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Rivelata is a LiveJournal-based RPG.
Introduction
Water lappingYou're uprocking against the sides of creaking woodback resoundsand fromforth allas sides,waves andlap anagainst itchywood. burlapYour blanketeyes scratchesopen whatto skinview isthe notclear coveredblue insky dirtyabove, andlittered rippedwith clothes.clouds Whencarrying yourrain. eyesWhere are opened,you? allHow youhave willyou seecome isto darknessbe -here, and thenwhy? fromVoices above,interrupt thereyour isheavy light.Itthoughts is-- daythey're aboveall thearound deckyou. ofSuddenly, theyou're shipnot youalone areanymore, apparentlyand everyone on,around you willis find,just ifas youlost.
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But what are you here for? Where's your world? TheOr Child-Queen Immaculadais willthere, tellperhaps, youmore itto isRivelata butthan theever willthought ofpossible? God
Gods. thatGold. broughtMagic. youPossibly here,a butway whetherhome. thatYou'll ishave trueto orsearch noton isyour forown...
Introduction
Water lappingYou're uprocking against the sides of creaking woodback resoundsand fromforth allas sides,waves andlap anagainst itchywood. burlapYour blanketeyes scratchesopen whatto skinview isthe notclear coveredblue insky dirtyabove, andlittered rippedwith clothes.clouds Whencarrying yourrain. eyesWhere are opened,you? allHow youhave willyou seecome isto darknessbe -here, and thenwhy? fromVoices above,interrupt thereyour isheavy light.Itthoughts is-- daythey're aboveall thearound deckyou. ofSuddenly, theyou're shipnot youalone areanymore, apparentlyand everyone on,around you willis find,just ifas youlost.
You choosecan tosee standa andcity walkenclosed upby the ricketydeep steps.greens Youof movea alonglush withjungle, awith hundredthe otherbuildings individualsclosest thatto hadit beendappled downand thereframed with you,various alltropical flora of themimpressive lookingbeauty. asThere disheveledis asa youvast do.expanse Ifof youwhite dobeach notand budge,rising restcliff-faces assuredall thatalong onethe ofcoast thebefore guardsyou. standingRich offarchitecture toline the sidestreets of -the thoseport tallcity, mensome incolourful elegantand uniformsvivid, reminiscentothers ofdark 18thand centuryin navaldisrepair. officersWithin armedthe withstreets, bayonetsthe -people willare bejust moreas thanvaried: happypoor towalking forceamong youthe above.Andmiddle whenclasses, youperhaps doeven come,a thenobleman saltywith seahis airguards. fillsGuards. yourMaybe nose,they stronghave enoughthe toanswers sting.you seek?
The airguards isexplain heavy,where dampyou andare: hot.Rivelata, Gullsonce cawthe above,home and to the east,dominion thereof isthe anChild-Queen endlessImmaculada, expansespirited ofaway water,in the occasionalnight, islandand inonce the distance,prison butof toZikhadhara, the west..."Godking." toWith the west, there seems to be adisappearance grandioseof andboth, elaborateRivelata coastalwas city.left Withwithout a colorful melange of people bustling toleader and-- frothat acrosswas, theuntil docksKing andAlastair onof the mainland, elegant Victorianfar-off architecture,country wroughtMirande ironcame fencesto andtake ricketycontrol. shacksRumors sideflutter bythrough side,the allair of it dappled and framed with various tropicalthe florastreets, ofhinting impressiveat beauty.hidden It'smotives. likeHad athis painting.ItKing istruly theonly Newcome World.to Atnot least,only that'sprotect whatRivelata, youbut overhear,hunt ifits there'streasures? aOr languageis youthere managemore to pick out, fromhim the bustling crowdsand ashis yougoals stepthan offmeets the ship, that you can recognize.eye?
But what are you here for? Where's your world? TheOr Child-Queen Immaculadais willthere, tellperhaps, youmore itto isRivelata butthan theever willthought ofpossible? God
Gods. thatGold. broughtMagic. youPossibly here,a butway whetherhome. thatYou'll ishave trueto orsearch noton isyour forown...
Secrets youcan't tofind discover.themselves.
